Visual Language - Set, Series, Sequence - End storyboard

So after deciding on what image to expand into a storyboard I began planning an appropriate narrative.

Because of the fragmented look of the 2 children because of the glasses effect, I developed this to represent a feeling of disposition the children have as a result of a negative circumstance, for example bullying and abuse. 

I decided the storyboard would pan out a sort of advert for a child abuse charity, encouraging children to speak out about troubles at home, for help to be finally "seen clearly".

My narrative follows 2 children, one a young boy who is getting bullied at school, the other a young girl who is being abused at home by her father. At the end, both children seek refuge, the boy seeking his mums support and the girl seeking help via a childline, then the glasses get put on over the camera lens, and the line that splits them disappears, demonstrating that they have finally been seen clearly by someone.