My crit today was very helpful, I showed people my animation so far where I got the comments:
- Professional looking
- Nice style and aesthetic
I also received some very helpful constructive feedback;
- To make the rock seem more heavier.
This is something I avoided because, there is no gravity on the moon, there therefore would be no weight on the rock... However from an animation movement standpoint it was suggested to me that I should still apply weight purely for the physics of animation rather than physics of real life (which I was more considering...) This can be achieved by adding in a head jolt and making his bum go dwon further to really "get under" the rock with muscle. So I will work on that before developing more new scenes.
- It looks like the astronaut is looking at the moon at the start
This was an interesting comment as I, obviously, cant view my animation as an outsider so I don't know how things look. But apparently the stance at the start of the astronaut gazing forward, looks as if the zoom in on the moon establishing shot actually looks like a 1st person shot of the astronaut. I could edit this entirely to his head looking at the floor right from the start, but I really like him looking down, I don't want him to remain static and lifeless.
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