Tuesday 24 November 2015

Interim Crit Feedback


The overall feedback from my presentation was very positive, which I am very happy about. I managed to present a wide variety of my development work within the 5 minute slot and even had time for some Q and A's, but no one had any questions or feedback.

I was happy with my confident approach during my presentation, I feel I caught the audience and involved them successfully into my world of work.

The positive feedback I received from my tutor was;
Nice development sketches
and good Moonling development.


However I also received some constructive feedback:
How to maintain the shading style throughout the animation. I never actually considered this but, thinking about it, yes I will be able to apply this to each frame effectively, It will take a lot of work but I will try.

To make the moonlings scale more visible... This was also an important feature than I never noticed:

So I instantly edited a frame into my animatic, I got rid of the Moonling keyframe sweep, and added a long shot side view of both the characters to add the element of scale.


I also extended the looking up scene and made the rock fall to the floor, a continuity error that I noticed.


The next piece of feedback I got for my next step was, begin animating!

I also had a chance to ask my piers which one looked best between the dark green and lighter green Moonling:

Dark Green


Light Green

And they decided that the dark green looked better, it had more emphasis about it! Which is great to find out.


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